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Reincarnation novel query
I haven't gotten any
bites for my query yet. I reformatted it several times, and this is the most
recent version. Any thoughts? Thanks!
Reincarnation addict Dom
wants to kick the habit and move on to the afterlife.
His three serial reincarnating
friends – Sophie, Grace and Peter – want him to go back to Earth with them one
more time. But when Dom agrees, he’s born into a life where he doesn’t remember
his past lives. When the four return to Limbo after their deaths, they learn
that only Sophie remembers their past lives. Scared and confused, Sophie wants
to stay in Limbo instead of going back for another lonely life on Earth, but Dom
left unfinished business behind before he died. Against Sophie’s wishes, they
return to Earth together. All for one, right?
But when their blank minds result
in one of them committing murder on Earth, Dom can’t move on to the afterlife
just yet. He has to go back with the group to help reconcile the aftermath.
Otherwise, one of them will
go straight to Hell.
THE TRAVELERS is an urban fantasy with romance, mystery and
history, told over the span of three lifetimes: pre-World War II Midwestern
America, early 21st century New York City and post-nuclear Brazil. It is
complete at 110,000 words and available for consideration.