Seeking Fantasy Lovers
Whether you're a casual Fantasy reader or a hardcore one, I'm seeking your opinion.
I've gotten wonderfully encouraging and helpful reviews on the first thirteen chapters of my Traditional Fantasy WIP, Destiny's Bond. Each of the nineteen reviews were thoughtful and most appreciated. However, now I'd like to ask for thoughts and opinions on the new chapters I've uploaded. There's twenty chapters in total, and they take up the second quarter of the manuscript, where the true plot reveals itself. I want to know whether those chapters flow well, whether the new characters I introduce are believable/likeable, and whether the readers are compelled to keep reading. In essence, whether the story peaks your interest is what I'm most curious about.
Rest assured any review will be reciprocated. Shout out down below and I'll check out your manuscript, too. Don't be shy!
Here's the link to mine: http://www.bookcountry.com/Bookdetail.aspx?BookId=7289
Any critique on any of the chapters after thirteen will be most appreciated!
Fantasy Fanatic and Writer, Amber