About the Book:
Asti Rynax was no longer a spy. Verci Rynax had quit being a thief. The brothers had settled back in the old neighborhood in West Maradaine, bought themselves a shop. Verci started a family. They were ready for a clean, honest life when the Holver Alley Fire incinerated their plans.
With no shop, no income and a looming debt to pay, the Rynax boys must go back to the old life. With a crew of other victims of the fire, they plan a simple carriage heist, but the gig gets complicated when they learn who had Holver Alley burned down. Smoldering for revenge, they take their crew of amateurs and has-beens up against the biggest man on the west side, no matter the cost.
About the Author:
Marshall Ryan Maresca is a fantasy & science fiction writer, as well as a playwright and amateur chef. He lives in South Austin with his wife and son.
I've only uploaded the first three chapters, but this is a complete novel. This is the latest draft after a round of worldbuilding tweaks.
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