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Rabbit Slayer | The Alice Chronicles

By MarkQuiet

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/9/2011

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 18 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 18 Reviews

Genre:

Urban Fantasy

Word Count:

3,405

About the Book:

When Emily's friend, Beth, is abducted by a cult of albinos called the White Rabbits she feels compelled to get her back. Emily accepts the help of a bizarre and lethal woman named Alice, who leads her on a journey that will challenge her belief between reality and fantasy. Alice explains that Lewis Carroll's classic isn't fiction but a deadly fact and Emily is their next target. Alice's outrageous tale becomes too true when Emily is tricked into Wonderland by a White Rabbit and ordered beheaded by the Queen of Hearts. Emily must overcome her insecurities to find the strength and courage to save Beth, Alice, and herself.

About the Author:

Kirk is an eclectic writer with varied hobbies. He lives in TX with his wife and 17 year old daughter.

Author's Note:

After much delay and reconsideration I have reposted the new beginning to RABBIT SLAYER. This opening is completely different than what of the commenters have read before. Please read with a fresh look. Granted there are some editing concerns, those will be corrected shortly. Note also that this is the story that is now agented. I may post up to three chapters, but no more. I hope you enjoy.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Voice, Character Development

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