About the Book:
Jesse has had trouble dealing with life ever since her sister fell into a coma. Attending Blackstone Academy is a chance for her to start over. But despite its posh private school exterior, Jesse has suspicions that there's more going on beneath the surface – something that could tie to her sister's illness.
About the Author:
Alana Joli Abbott is a columnist, reviewer, and fiction and comic writer from shoreline CT. She studies karate and is training her daughter to be a ninja.
I've started this novel a few times, and I'm still not sure I've started it correctly. This draft doesn't yet include changes based on comments from my crit group, so I know there are things that need changing – and I'm totally open to hearing more comments on what needs fixing!
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