The Shepherd's Crook | Chapters 1 - 3

By Jerrid Wolflick

Draft 1 Posted Date: 2/25/2013

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Supernatural Thriller

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About the Book:

Jonathan de Grun dreams the kidnapping of other young people. He lives in rural Nebraska and has convinced his mother that he has simple night terrors. Soon after the most recent kidnapping he meets and is befriended by a mysterious youth who just started going to his high school, Kohl Phrygeston. Kohl and Jonathan become very close. Kohl seems to live a charmed life: rich, free,and happy. Kohl is more than he appears. Jonathan's mother is single and going out with a local teacher whose brother is the detective in charge of the local kidnapping. Through many trials Jonathan and Kohl become embroiled in an accident gone awry.

About the Author:

I am a writer who works as an editor and ghostwriter during the day and escapes to the heights of imagination at night. Sleep is distracting,

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