About the Book:
Daniel, a reincarnated Greek god, has lived his life searching for his lost lover that was banished from the grounds of Olympus centuries ago. When he meets a girl named Sophia at school he learns that she may be the one he has been looking for even though she has no recognition of who he is. That is until a near death accident causing Daniel to reveal himself to her and a future that ends with the extinction of her family . Will he be able to help her regain her memory in time to save her family and possibly the future of Olympus itself?
About the Author:
Turquoise Turner is a military spouse and stay at home mother with a passion for writing. She is following her dream of writing novels and short stories.
Hello, I'm an aspiring author and this is my first attempt at writing a novel. This is a very rough first draft that has yet to be revised. I am not looking for critiques on grammatical and spelling mistakes, but they are welcomed. I am still in the process of writing this MS, but this is the very beginning. Where this is only one chapter, the book will actually be around 22-24 chapters. I would like help with dialogue, pacing, and overall structure. Thank you for reading.
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