About the Book:
When Jace started at Leanton School, he really wasn't expecting just how messed up things were going to get. First he gets roped into protecting his house mates from their own demons. Then he gets ostracised by them. Now he's trying to protect people who hate him, in between studying and learning to fight. What he doesn't know is that the end of his school is coming and he's going to face the worst nightmare in the world for a group of people who hate him.
About the Author:
Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.
This is my 2012 Nanowrimo entry. Yeah it's a little bit of a mess. The story's quite dark, with me exploring a lot of unpleasant experiences. It's all inspired by my own school experiences and difference between Hogwarts and my school. Suffice to say things are a lot more adult and a lot more messed up.
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Overall Feedback, Voice, Character Development