About the Book:
From the shadows of her shattered innocence, a fourteen year old girl becomes a ruthless instrument of vengeance for her governess.
About the Author:
Terryll Preston was a soldier, is a fan of imagination and a geek. He is an artist and, of course, writes; which he considers his first love. Texas is his home.
This is one of the very first stories I wrote with serious intent and, eventually, posted online. Though I have revised and updated it recently, it's still based on an older writing style I once used. I would really like to get some feedback as to address any problems with my writing. While I consider myself a good writer, I still have doubts about my talent. Please read and critique if you have the spare time to do so. I could really use the advice. Also, please excuse any errors in the Japanese/English translation of the chapter titles. All I had available was Google Translate...
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Voice, Pacing