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The Journey of the Lost

By Maria Escobedo

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/8/2012

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Genre:

Contemporary Fantasy

Word Count:

2,745

About the Book:

Shizuko Aoki's life was difficult, but with the help of her brother, her odd behaviors vanished. But soon, her life, and the lives of others like her, will be forever changed by the tides of hatred, fear, and bigotry, both from within and without the community of the 'connected' people.

About the Author:

Maria Escobedo was born in 1992, and has been wreaking havoc in her local community ever since. She is an avid reader, writer, and all-around oddity.

Author's Note:

(My first book, Ravenna, was a bit of a disaster. My apologies for any trouble.) This is my first real story, but please feel free to give the harshest constructive criticism necessary. I will be glad to offer any answers to your questions, and I hope to have the rest of my work soon. Thank you all for your help! Your criticism is greatly appreciated!

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Dialogue

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