Death and Rememberment | One Bad Decision

People say Eileen McReilly went crazy when her husband and baby were killed. Now her mother has died. She befriends spirits from beyond, but there is nothing friendly about the attacks visited upon her since her mother's death. No one-- spirits, her brother Charlie, his wife, or loyal admirer Wally Bryant --can help her fend off the building storm that threatens to drag her soul to hell. Jack Keating, with a twelve-year old warrant haunting him, should be as far from Pawhuska, Oklahoma as possible, but he needs to mend some of the bridges he burned. No one is doing well since he left and little Eileen has troubles only Jack can solve. His old friend Nate becomes the pawn in the struggle between good and evil. Jack calls on his Osage Indian heritage, but a botched ritual leaves Jack at Death's door. Deputy sheriff Wally Bryant has been patiently waiting for his longtime crush to realize they are meant for each other, but nothing works. Eileen is falling for the criminal Jack, and Wal

Kat writes paranormal and fantasy fiction with strong romantic elements and has completed two books and one novella. She teaches art at a small school.

I've written and rewritten this piece over the course of seveal years--looking for some conscientious feedback. The book is finished, waiting for your requests to see more. I'd like opinions on using the subtitle or title. Do I need more descriptions? Thanks!