By Anna Spargo Ryan

Draft 1 Posted Date: 12/28/2011

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Contemporary Romance

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About the Book:

Heather looks for love in all the wrong places, but her undoing comes from a dark, mysterious foreigner. (Very short story, <1000 words)

About the Author:

I am a Digital Producer working in television. I live in Melbourne with my partner, daughters and dogs, and moonlight as an opera singer.

Author's Note:

This is a short story written as part of an exercise. Each sentence begins with the first word of another sentence (one I chose from Catch 22). I intend to expand on the story later this year, and look forward to getting to know Heather better :)

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