By Tim Gordon

Draft 2 Posted Date: 5/3/2012

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Contemporary Fantasy

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About the Book:

He wasn't crazy. Just anxious. Finley couldn't stop it, couldn't keep the welling fear down when he was left alone. It was a normal condition, at least that's what Doctor Hale told him, but that didn't lessen his guilt when his parents were forced to stay home and "babysit" instead of enjoying a night away. He was trying, though. Trying to be normal. He was twelve, he could handle waiting at a bus stop while his mom went to an appointment. Simple. Yet panic set in within moments of the car disappearing out of view. And, despite the same churning in his gut that happened time and time again, this time the irrational fear might actually be justified.

About the Author:

Tim Gordon is a public accountant in Colorado who decided to move off the number pad and discover what the other keys on the keyboard could do

Author's Note:

New version as of 1/8/13. Spent the last year retooling signification portions. It's about where I think it's decent, which means it's time for a good 3rd party tear down. Please let me know what I need to do to make it better. Thanks!

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