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Windriders | Book One in the Saga of the Windriders

By Timothy Maguire

Draft 5 Posted Date: 5/1/2013

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 1 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 4 Reviews

Genre:

Soft Science Fiction

Word Count:

20,189

About the Book:

Windriders is the official nickname for a special police squad that targets law-breaking gliders, sports enthusiasts that ride the constant gales of Mars' Canyon City. An eclectic group, they find themselves recruiting a student from the Moon as they become entangled in the machinations of a group of mysterious terrorists. They might be the only chance to save the city and an entire off-shoot of humanity.

About the Author:

Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.

Author's Note:

I haven't worked on this for a while and I need a little bit of a kick to get back into the swing of it. I'm mostly looking for feedback on characterization and setting, as I always worry that I'm not getting across the ideas in my head. Thanks to GD for making me notice I hadn't bothered uploading most of this.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Setting

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