Renascence of Pure Magic | Book 1 of the Pure Magic series

By PureMagic

Draft 1 Posted Date: 12/13/2011

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High / Epic Fantasy

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About the Book:

Renascence of Pure Magic begins the tale of a new and dangerous power rising in the world. Arissiboné is ruled by Ra’el Malstrades, a man whose life changed when he discovered the existence of the Pure Magic and who will do anything – including sending his sister Vestyra into the arms of the enemy leader Revelyn Santare – to sway its wielders to his side and end the century-old war that looms over everything. In Thulissia, Garnett Eldin is the first to bear the burden of the Pure Magic, and she is forced to flee with the aid of her brother and her friends while trying to come to grips with the power roiling in her flesh. She is pursued by the vicious Talis’l’Ma and a relentless group of men led by Del'sin Atano who, following the commands of Lord Ra’el, finds that the magic has crafted a unique destiny for him. These people and many others will learn or redefine who they are, growing in unexpected ways as fate drags them to a climactic confrontation with the things which hunt them.

About the Author:

Pure Magic lives on Long Island. You can find an eclectic collection of books on his shelves along with his cats. He has a BA in English Education and is crazy.

Author's Note:

This fantasy story is set in a world constructed with some familiar conventions of the genre but with various twists on the themes; readers experienced in fantasy will find some comfortable places to help lead them into the experience as the story expands in unfamiliar directions, while readers new to fantasy will have no trouble acclimating to the story as it grows at a natural pace. Renascence of Pure Magic is my first novel. Revisions are underway on the first 2 chapters, but I added 5 & 6 for additional feedback. Thanks to all who take the time to read all of this, I know it is long!

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