By KatesQuill

Draft 2 Posted Date: 10/27/2011

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Traditional Fantasy

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About the Book:

Eleni. A warrior princess, enslaved. Schooled in deceit and lies, she is raised to kill the man who brought death upon her family and stole her throne. Artem. Forever in the shadow of his older brother who will ascend to the blood-stained throne, he is embittered and enraged; but he cannot resist the temptation to take what should never be his. Together, they will wreak chaos upon all who would stand in their path. And between them - a warlock who will stop at nothing to have his revenge...

About the Author:

Kate Monroe is a red-headed author who lives near the sea in a quiet corner of southern England. She has fatal weaknesses for both red wine and old movies.

Author's Note:

Here are the first five chapters of a fantasy novel that's been playing out inside my head for some time. This is only a first draft, and is subject to edits as I upload further chapters. All feedback is very grateful recognised and appreciated! PS. As I am an English author, please note that this novel is written in British English.

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