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A Kaliphian Matter: Revelations

By Angela Martello

Draft 45 Posted Date: 11/2/2012

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 2 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 11 Reviews

Genre:

Space Opera

Word Count:

116,790

About the Book:

Ben Gerrickson, a pilot with the diplomatic arm of the Earth Corps, saves a fellow crewmate’s life during the Kargin War by unwillingly unleashing a great power that had been simmering within him for years. Within days of being summoned to a hearing to explain his actions, he receives a tiny plant from Kaliph, the world he left when he was a boy – a world imbued with a powerful ambient energy. When he touches the plant, long-buried memories rush to the surface, and Ben begins to understand why he had been sent to Earth in the first place: someone had tried to kill him. When he returns to the planet of his birth to get some answers, he soon discovers the truth of who and what he really is. He also learns that he must use his wildly destructive power not just to protect himself, but to protect his people – the same people who want to see him dead.

About the Author:

With degrees in geology and sci/tech writing, Angela has worked in STM publishing for 20 years. She also makes tiles, volunteers, and "trains" her dog, Ben.

Author's Note:

In this draft, I've combined some chapters, dropped another 3000 words, and made some fundamental changes. As always, I would appreciate more feedback. Thanks!

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing

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