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The Writer

By Michael Guarneiri

Draft 4 Posted Date: 9/5/2011

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 4 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 8 Reviews

Genre:

Traditional Fantasy

Word Count:

3,648

About the Book:

Dealing with tragedy, a writer finds an outlet for his feelings in a story about a pair of children searching for their brother in a strange land full of walking trees, talking bears, and all things fantastic.

About the Author:

Michael lives with his family (mother, father, four siblings, and two dogs) on Long Island. They (along with his closest friends) are the world to him.

Author's Note:

In all likelihood, I will submit this story with my MFA applications. The smallest (perhaps seemingly unimportant) criticisms, can make a huge difference. For my feedback criteria, I've chosen Character Development and Plot (as I find that they are essential elements of any story) but I urge you to touch upon other areas as well. This is an early draft and needs polishing. I'd like to thank everyone in advance for helping me with this. It might change my life.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Plot

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