About the Book:
Allison is the Raven, Cedarville's own costumed vigilante. Things aren't going well for her right now. She's a murder suspect, a gang war is brewing, and both are linked to something much bigger that could rock her city to the core. While she's dealing with that, she's also got to handle the "normal" side of her life -- a day job at the local martial arts academy and a new roommate, Lia, to keep her secret from. As things heat up for Raven, Lia begins to support her in ways she never expected. Allison isn't looking for love, but she just might find it with Lia — if they can survive the trickery and mayhem coming their way.
About the Author:
Kristin is an aerospace engineer. When she's not working on the future of human spaceflight, she writes fantasy, watches TV, and laughs at her two crazy cats.
I've made major changes to the timeline since the previous draft. Hopefully the pacing works. I'll add more chapters as they're written.
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Overall Feedback, Voice, Pacing