About the Book:
Fate, its power binds us all. From a delicate butterfly to a raging storm, the pull of Fate's threads touch every aspect of life. Few acknowledge it and even fewer comprehend it, but one thing is certain. Nobody can escape it.
No one understands this like Noal Kai. His fate has laid waste to cities, decimated armies, and made him the target of fear, loathing, and hatred the world over. For him there are only two choices.
Lay down and become a puppet, or stand up and fight against Fate itself...
About the Author:
Matthew Chan is a child of modern medias, an avid gamer, snowboarder, and japanophile. He currently works in the entertainment industry as a 3D artist.
For now I'm going to keep just the first chapter of my book here on BookCountry. If you like what you see here then I invite you to visit my site at http://www.tof.matthew-chan.com for additional chapters!
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