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Torn | Angel of Tears

By Stevie McCoy

Draft 31 Posted Date: 2/13/2013

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Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 15 Reviews

Genre:

Paranormal Romance

Word Count:

2,480

About the Book:

Marie was anything but ordinary but not because she sang like an angel or danced with insurmountable elegance, though those talents didn’t hurt her case. Any human contact sent severe pain coursing through her body. Only recently did she realize that as she experienced that pain the person she touched is relieved of it. Marie’s best friend, Terry, decided it was high time she stop hiding and take on an extracurricular activity at school. Terry decided on theatre which is possibly home to the most pained and emotional people on Earth. While trying to avoid sensory overload Marie discovered she was a reborn angel named Jadyn, the Angel of Tears, and being responsible for taking on the weight of human pain on her shoulders is a lot to ask of a high school student. Fortunately she was given the choice between accepting her duties or giving them up for love but that decision isn’t as easy as it seems.

About the Author:

The music is in the thoughts of the characters as they struggle, fall and triumph. When she isn't dancing she is writing their songs.

Author's Note:

Micha is pronounced : (My-Ka) Story is in progress being revised into past tense and editing part of the begining story line to introduce the main character Marie differently. Any commentary on revising to improve readability and or just thoughts on the story's progression are more than welcome!

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Voice, Character Development

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