By JamieWyman

Draft 1 Posted Date: 5/22/2011

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About the Book:

Pop-star Samantha Crane wakes up to find herself in a sewer. This isn't her best day.

About the Author:

All writings are fueled by chai and a Ouija board. Okay, maybe not the Ouija board. Repped by Jennie Goloboy at Red Sofa Literary.

Author's Note:

Once again, this is a piece I wrote for a flash fiction challenge. In this challenge, I selected the word Magpie to be my title and concept. What follows is the rough draft of that exercise. Critique and comments welcome. Thank you so much for reading.

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