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Forsaken

By Kristine Ondrus

Draft 1 Posted Date: 5/2/2011

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 3 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 3 Reviews

Genre:

Urban Fantasy

Word Count:

3,676

About the Book:

Lisette Thomas comes from a house of abuse an neglect. Fleeing her home one night she runs into a vampire who decides to end her suffering. After tasting her blood he decides to turn her into a vampire. The first chapter places her at her transformation as she emerges into a new world. The vampire who turned her, Robert is completely insane and she soon learns what happens if when she crosses him. This was the story I was working on when From Russia With Blood came to me. It is not edited and very raw.

About the Author:

Now a Nor Ca native she enjoys; reading, gardening, and anything crafty. A love of reading, especially vampire stories inspired her to become a novelist..

Author's Note:

I wrote this quickly before turning to write another story to set some history for Forsaken. It will be part of a series. It is pretty raw and the intro is missing but I wanted to get it out there to see what you think of it.

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