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Red Autumn

By LeeAnna Holt

Draft 1 Posted Date: 5/1/2011

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 5 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 5 Reviews

Genre:

Traditional Fantasy

Word Count:

4,964

About the Book:

Adamar Vegana has been at Red Autumn Military Academy since he was six. At the age of twelve, he has skipped four years and now must train with boys much older than himself. During a standard training exercise he is severely wounded by a dangerous creature and must deal with the idea of mortality.

About the Author:

Writing since before she knew the alphabet, her husband must now battle with her love for the craft.

Author's Note:

This was a short story I wrote to explore one of my characters from my novel. It is one of my favorites, but hardly one of my best. I simply wish to share it.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing

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