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Hands of Ash | Book One of The Descendants
By
LeeAnna Holt
Draft 54 Posted Date: 4/18/2013
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Based on 25 Reviews
Genre:
High / Epic Fantasy
Word Count:
15,174
About the Book:
Thirteen years ago, Melodina Moonari was the only survivor when her village was destroyed by monsters made of ash. Adopted by a childless king for her heritage, she is to wed by her eighteenth birthday. The deadline is up and she has one suitor left, a young hero prince. When the capital of his land is destroyed by the same monsters who killed her mother, Melodina sets up on a quest to find the one responsible for the massacres and to uncover the truth of her identity.
About the Author:
Writing since before she knew the alphabet, her husband must now battle with her love for the craft.
Author's Note:
Brand new chapter three is up. I have removed the later chapters while I work on them. Sorry if you were reading them.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing
Peer Reviews
Draft 54 4/18/2013 (2) Reviews
Draft 52 4/8/2013 (1) Reviews
Draft 51 1/7/2013 (4) Reviews
Draft 44 11/6/2012 (1) Reviews
Draft 35 12/19/2011 (9) Reviews
Draft 15 11/28/2011 (1) Reviews
Draft 12 9/22/2011 (2) Reviews
Draft 11 7/22/2011 (1) Reviews
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Draft 8 5/27/2011 (1) Reviews
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