Hands of Ash | Book One of The Descendants

By LeeAnna Holt

Draft 54 Posted Date: 4/18/2013

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High / Epic Fantasy

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About the Book:

Thirteen years ago, Melodina Moonari was the only survivor when her village was destroyed by monsters made of ash. Adopted by a childless king for her heritage, she is to wed by her eighteenth birthday. The deadline is up and she has one suitor left, a young hero prince. When the capital of his land is destroyed by the same monsters who killed her mother, Melodina sets up on a quest to find the one responsible for the massacres and to uncover the truth of her identity.

About the Author:

Writing since before she knew the alphabet, her husband must now battle with her love for the craft.

Author's Note:

Brand new chapter three is up. I have removed the later chapters while I work on them. Sorry if you were reading them.

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