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Without Mention | Without Series Book one

By Armine

Draft 4 Posted Date: 6/3/2011

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 4 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 11 Reviews

Genre:

High / Epic Fantasy

Word Count:

4,265

About the Book:

When Oden joins a squad in the royal army, he learns that the human race is not in control like he always believed. There is a war, a war between the races.

About the Author:

Armine is an aspiring young writer. Other than books, she enjoys music and movies. Still in High school, her favourite subjects are English, Computers, and Art.

Author's Note:

Thank you for your reviews, they help me greatly. I went over it all with a friend, so it should be better. I hope you enjoy the new draft and the new chapter.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing

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