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Without Mention | Without Series Book one
By
Armine
Draft 4 Posted Date: 6/3/2011
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Based on 11 Reviews
Genre:
High / Epic Fantasy
Word Count:
4,265
About the Book:
When Oden joins a squad in the royal army, he learns that the human race is not in control like he always believed. There is a war, a war between the races.
About the Author:
Armine is an aspiring young writer. Other than books, she enjoys music and movies. Still in High school, her favourite subjects are English, Computers, and Art.
Author's Note:
Thank you for your reviews, they help me greatly. I went over it all with a friend, so it should be better. I hope you enjoy the new draft and the new chapter.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing
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Draft 4 6/3/2011 (4) Reviews
Draft 3 5/10/2011 (4) Reviews
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