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Triads

By momgotshocked

Draft 10 Posted Date: 10/1/2012

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Genre:

Postapocalyptic/Dystopian

Word Count:

9,792

About the Book:

Two's company, three's a crowd…but not in Adam Jeden's tri-gendered, post-nuclear world. Though it’s been six centuries since the Cataclysm, the human species still struggles to recover from the threat of extinction, and reproduction is compulsory. Adam's triad is reaching the end of their allotted time. Consequences will be harsh. When the desperate family discovers a secret, unorthodox fertility study, they enroll, thinking think they’ve found their answer. But the results are more than they bargained for.

About the Author:

garden-happy, slow-food enthusiast with a masochistic need to bang my head against the typewriter when I'm not wrestling with failed bread dough in the kitchen.

Author's Note:

These are the first few chapters of a completed MS. Be harsh, please -- I want to use this site to find out what's WRONG with it! Thanks! P.S. I'm most concerned about 1st chapter -- feel free to crit only that, if you like. Thanks!

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