By John DeJordy

Draft 1 Posted Date: 4/29/2011

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High / Epic Fantasy

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About the Book:

Picayune dreams of far away places - of knights and dragons and princesses and treasure. But that is all they ever are, dreams. He feels the rush and passion, but when they are over, the residual aftermath of the dreams only remind him of how little he really is. After all, he is just a dormouse. He lives a quiet life in his father's shop wishing something would change. One day, a sole survivor from the town's Taiga Riders return with horror in his eyes. Dragon has return. Picayune retreats to the confines of his home, until he hears of his friend Ameera, that set off to find out what happened to her cousin. Torn between staying the way he always has been, and adventuring off to help her, he comes to a decision. And thus, his adventure begins...

About the Author:

Since the early 80s John has exposed himself in fantasy. From playing D&D and LARPs, there hasn't been a time he was been jotting some blurb on stories.

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