By MR Nelson

Draft 2 Posted Date: 11/22/2012

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About the Book:

Sam Minor remembers nothing prior to age six. What little she does know of her gruesome past is gleamed from old newspaper articles. But when Sam visits her adoptive parents at their new home fourteen years later, she will not only learn the secrets of her own past, but the dark history of the region in which her parents now live. Now, Sam must fight for her survival against unearthly forces determined to destroy her in this world and the next.

About the Author:

M.R. Nelson's writings focus primarily on speculative fiction. He lives in Ohio with his wife and a host of furry creatures who are, quite frankly, mooches.

Author's Note:

I wrote this book a couple of years ago and revised the first three chapters, but was never quite satisfied with it enough to submit. Still, I would like to hear thoughts from other writers as you can never be quite certain about a piece you have spent hours staring at. Sometimes you can work something until you hate the sight of it. I imagine some of you out there can relate.

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