About the Book:
In a world where almost every baby is born with a guardian angel, Abby falls in love with Lathan, an Unguarded boy whose parents Banished his guardian at birth. The relationship sparks her testing with her angel, Naya. Naya disapproves of Lathan, knowing his unprotected status has attracted a demon with dark plans for her human. When Lathan urges Abby to banish her angel, Abby faces a choice: should she trust the old love or the new?
About the Author:
Former journalist-turned-teacher, writer, Alaska mom.
This is a first draft work-in-progress and a total change from the original MS posted here. I'm undecided between chapters 2 and 3 - leaning toward removing ch. 2. Let me know what you think. Any specific suggestions on improvements are very welcome - I'm thick skinned. And I'm always happy to swap - leave the title of your WIP and I'll stop by to critique. Thanks for your time!! A word about the genre: I've think this story fits in the supernatural genre. This is NOT paranormal - no vampires, werewolves, etc. - just angels and demons. But it's as closwe as I could get. Genre advice welcome!
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Voice, Plot