About the Book:
For Connie Boyle, a job at the Hayfork, Kansas library was just an excuse to get away from her abusive husband. But when she learns that she’s the only one who can hear the not-so-dead specter haunting her workplace, she vows to find out what happened to the ghostly teenage Wallflower. Working in secret, Connie and Wallflower find strength in their friendship. But is it enough to stop a serial killer who hides in plain sight? 76
About the Author:
Jennifer is 100% writer and 10% karaoke nut. She is currently enjoying the creation of her fourth novel and first YA venture entitled "Furthermoore."
I would categorize "Wallflower" as a paranormal mystery. This is my fourth novel and the dearest to my heart. I'm looking for honest critiques minus grammar and punctuation corrections. That's my weakness and can be resolved with editing later on. In addition to telling me what's wrong with this story, please relay what you like about it. Thank you for reading.
NOTE: "Wallflower" has found a home! Published by Bradley Publishing, you can now purchase "Wallflower" on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. http://bradleypublishings.com/Jennifer_B.php
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Voice, Character Development