About the Book:
The lots-of-concept description for this story is "Post-Colonial Alternative Kinship Bisexual Polyamory Romance."
It began as a short story at Clarion West 2007 and has grown into a novelette. It's been very hard to revise, but I think I'm almost there. I'd love some feedback from folk to see if they think it needs any substantial work.
About the Author:
Michael works as an independent publishers' representative. In his free time, he dances Argentine Tango and studies Renaissance martial arts.
The novelette is broken into three documents for ease of reading, rather than actual internal structure.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Character Development, Dialogue